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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Ancient Tree

November 19th 2006 09:45
I never thought I'd see those leaves again
I often looked longingly at that bare tree
That once stood heavy laden with leaves
Framing the flowers, the fruit, the beauty
Before it died off into dormancy

I knew that the life was stored deep within
Knowing the tree had all it needs to begin again
As the resurrection brings forth its mystery
I watch and see newborn shoots bring its promise
Evoking memories of hope back to me

This age old tree with it's many lessons to bare
Represents to me the promise of unfolded future
Promises of fruits and flora to follow
Reminding me of the ebb and flow of seasons
I am grateful to see the sun once more

~Lily 2001



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Comment by Wendi

November 19th 2006 15:03
Nice connection - the tree with the spirit. I've encountered many souls who forget that spring will return and so they give up.

I believe Autumn is my favorite season because it represents, for me, a time of peaceful change and an opportunity to shed certain elements in preparation for rest and renewal.

Nicely done.

W

Comment by ThomasM

November 19th 2006 17:01
I'm a bit jealous. We're entering winter as you enter summer and everything's awakening. We're all going to sleep over here. Oh well, it makes waking up in the Spring even more beautiful.

T

Comment by DuskDevi

November 20th 2006 01:32
~Lily love...

Just to let you know I came by.
I hope you are well et les chaussures gave you beaucoup de plaisir

This is lovely ~Lily love. Hope springs eternal.
And you should really publish a book...

Dusk

Comment by Mrs M

November 20th 2006 11:04
Very nice.

I like this one alot.

Mrs M.

Comment by Lily

November 20th 2006 22:03
Wendy; i like all the seasons for all the different moods they bring.. pleasure to see you here..

Thommo; cabin havens are nice for a while; until it turns into fever... spring always comes around... thanks ~T

Dusk; we just have to remember to look at the arbre antique .. thanks for basking in my hope-sun... ...appréciez

Mrs M: merci, also a pleasure to see you, the Divine Mrs M....

~Lily


Comment by Lilla

November 21st 2006 08:20
~Lily,

...just to let you know,
I stopped by for a while,
to sit under your tree...
...I breathed the cool air...
and met the ducks from the pond...

I will come back again...
...in the spring...

*refreshed*

Lilla...

Comment by Lily

November 21st 2006 08:41
Lilla,

There is fresh flowers on the kitchen table, hyacinths and jasmine, the view is fine for us to gaze out onto the hope tree. A cool glass of chilled fresh strawberry and apple juice, for you.

I really need this poem lol

~Lily

Comment by Lilla

November 21st 2006 09:38
Lily my love,

was that 'need' for real... or 'need' as in NOT!!?

Lill-a. )

Comment by Lily

November 21st 2006 09:44
for real




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