brown paper bag
November 17th 2007 01:20
you’re so out of touch
just one in a crowd
of bubble worlds
noise and napkins
from map to map
you’re a star
yes you are
grapes and fans
and long lost lands
obsessions and hearts ablaze
and urgencies laid
upon our spine
~Lily
just one in a crowd
of bubble worlds
noise and napkins
from map to map
you’re a star
yes you are
grapes and fans
and long lost lands
obsessions and hearts ablaze
and urgencies laid
upon our spine
~Lily
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Comment by Bullamakanka
Hughie's Ziff
Verra nice indeed lassie. Love an artist at work.
George
Comment by Always Eighteen
Always Eighteen
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
George, my good and faithful reader, i'm not a bloody artist Laddie, i'm a fingerpainter in the literary world. .. but thanks any ole how my friend
Dean, I'm managing to hang in there with Orble.. some weeks there will be some specks of gold in the pan on that front page, oher times it pisses me off no end that people could write such trash about insignificant things in the light of the way things are in the world at the moment.. and far too much belly-aching...ok, soapbox bleh over.. you are welcome to visit my poetry anytime... i'm honoured that you do
grumpy ole ~Lily
Comment by Bullamakanka
Hughie's Ziff
Some of the worlds greatest artists used there fingers.
Get over it.
George
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
~Lily
Comment by Bullamakanka
Hughie's Ziff
You're a good poet, shout it to the world.
Like taking pictures, we don't always like our poems, But we learn something from everyone of them.
Thank you for writing.
George
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
Just had a read and a vote through all your recents...Inspired and touched by your talent as usual Dear One....
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
Hi Kleo .. always a pleasure to see you my friend... thankU
~Lily