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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Cantata

October 19th 2007 10:05
We said our prayers
on the cold slate
before the cantata
rose out of the mouths
of ancient crones who
only remember endearment
through the telling of
dreams by the darlings


~Lily

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Comment by theadora

October 22nd 2007 05:01
i voted for this but it only registered as 1point so here are some more points my dear,

enjoyed this work, indeed

regards theadora

Comment by Always Eighteen

October 23rd 2007 12:44
Short yet more than a thousand words.

It's specific yet vague at the same time, allowing me to interpret it in all my messed up ways.









Comment by Lily

October 23rd 2007 23:40
theadora, the points don't matter, just glad you came to sit and read, thanks muchly my friend..

dean, i'd be interested to hear how you did interpret it, my left brain fought with my right brain over this one : smile : ....appreciate your visit dean

~Lily

Comment by Ash

October 25th 2007 21:47
Hi Lily

I often wonder what it must be like to live in the Church. I wonder about how loving our God is and yet how cold some appear, how the constrast of the beauty of the church itself clashes with the cold stone walls.

I think we have got it wrong in our interpretation over the centuries.

Ash

Comment by Kleonaptra

October 27th 2007 10:50
Lily,
So lovely, as usual. You put so much into such a short space.

Comment by Lily

October 31st 2007 21:03
Hi Ash,

those stained glass story teller windows, set into walls of cold stone... maybe the contrast tells the story .. who knows .. just my thoughts...

Kleo, my muse puts blinders on my brain, then whips it off and it comes out in short little bursts -- like a summer shower.. doesn't last for long... (where did that come from?) lol

hugs for you two chickas...

~Lily

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