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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Dear God

April 26th 2007 11:17

Dear God, all I have to give you
are my feelings and words
take them
…and me.

Here I am
Kicking dust on the moon again
Watching earth rise

Satellites drifting overhead
Some have their eyes on full alert
Some are sleeping

Am I here?
There is a patch of moon rock
Waiting just for you

Let’s talk and find that road
Through space
That winds easy to the stars

And find what we need
Hold close my open heart
I am here

~Lily
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Comment by DuskDevi

April 26th 2007 11:25
...oh ~Lily....

This is so powerful.

I am here

You are Reine...that you are...

much warmth

Dusk


Comment by Lily

April 26th 2007 11:54
Dusk,

powerful emoceans pull me to galaxies that reign over my world tonight... i am so angry, i could supernova all over the place....

thank God for words, my blog, my friends...

~Lily

Comment by Ash

April 26th 2007 13:38
Hey Lily,

This is BEAUTIFUL Lily.... so very, very meaningful... I don`t really know how to put into words what I think when I read it... I know sometimes comments can come across as being slightly patronizing which can make you wonder WHAT the person was thinking when they read it... so I will just say it`s beautiful and reiterate what Dusk says.... so powerful!

luffs and hugs to ya gerl x

Comment by charliesgirl_992000

April 26th 2007 21:50
"....Kicking dust on the moon again...."

i LOVE the whole thing but especialy LOVE this part!!!
Beautiful! Tammy

Comment by Kleonaptra

April 27th 2007 04:08
This is just incredible...
So many of us remember the sky from a different perspective, and know the ones of power as well known instead of distant judges...
But few express so well as you dear Lily....

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 27th 2007 08:34
Dear Lily........you take the time to look upwards....you take the time.......beautiful words, beautifully constructed......you are here....or there...or wherever your dreams take you XXXXXXXXX

Comment by Lily

April 28th 2007 00:54
Ash,

Thank you Ash, i know you know, kindred...
hoping all is well and well lit in your corner of the world baby gurl...

lossa luff and hergs,

~Lily


Comment by Lily

April 28th 2007 00:58
Hi Tammy,

welcome to the world of Lily's Ars lol .. you'll notice she likes to travel... your visitation much appreciated...

~Lily


Comment by Lily

April 28th 2007 01:04
Kleo,

So many of us remember the sky from a different perspective, and know the ones of power as well known instead of distant judges...

Hell, you just made my brain go wild, like horses nodding, prancing .. yessa lol

what an amazing thing to say... lordy, you come out with some gems....

thank u'z muchly gerl..

~Lily


Comment by Lily

April 28th 2007 01:06
Miss Nomer,

Yes I do, it's quieter up there sometimes, i'm not sure where my dreams are, i'm trying to find them... or let them find me?

merci mon ami,
and warmth to you Miss N...

~Lily


Comment by Kleonaptra

April 30th 2007 00:58
It was your imagery that inspired it dear LilyFlower...

Comment by Lily

April 30th 2007 01:09
Kleo,

i'm still glad you said it, shared it..
merci for tha inspiro, mon ami...

~Lily

Comment by Wendi

April 30th 2007 22:52
Lily -

You have an amazing gift with words and imagery. I loved the moon dust bit, as well as your "super nova" from the comments section.

You're hitting home with me.

I'm really sorry for the anger that provoked it,
yet really grateful for the gift of your words.

W

Comment by Lily

May 7th 2007 21:53
merci Wendi...

sometimes i wonder if i travel to the outer spaces in my poetry to cope with the claustrophobia of reality ~shrugs

i can't express my thanks enough ...

~Lily


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