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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Dream for Yellow

November 1st 2007 22:22
fairytale fantasy
sweeter thoughts
princess rooms
and stocking seams
peas for the mattress
a spritz of rosewater
and jasmine tea at dawn
parasols for a beating sun
and the kiss of a foreigner



~Lily

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Comment by Ash

November 5th 2007 10:55
Hey Lily

I LOVE these thoughts... it`s like a crazy summer day when you lie in the warm sun and your thoughts filter into one another... one delicious moment after the next!

xxx

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 5th 2007 11:26
I love the imagery! Such a feel-good poem. It makes me want to wear a yellow tutu and go prancing around the meadow. It makes me happy! (Nevermind if others think it's nuts to do that!)

Comment by Lilla

November 7th 2007 02:57
Aah, echo...echo...echo... images of sun drenched fields, filled with buttercups and daisy's; blowing dandelions ~ whose little parachuted seeds fill the air ~ along with other floating gossimer, like tiny faeries all making magic ... and there a kiss ... how nice.

Thank you for the refreshing refrain in this meadow Lily...x

Comment by Lily

November 7th 2007 06:42
Ash, i'm glad it gave you some delish moments.. ah summer, beaches, swimming, warmth, flowers, scented breezes, sand, sunburn, hot sleepless nights lol - thanks chickaaa

What's your Story? (Morning Glory) -- do you get that all the time? i don't even know where i've heard that from lol -- i don't think it's nuts to run around a meadow in a yellow tutu, i do it all the time hahahah .. nah .. means a lot that my words can make someone happy, thank U

Lilla, i'm in a particularly black mood at the moment, but the scene you created, sigh, brightened it up a bitty.. thank you my friend.. great to see you again...x

~Lily




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