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July 24th 2007 15:56

When i woke up this morning, I ..........?




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Comment by Ash

July 24th 2007 22:23
wondered what land this was
that lay before my dream-filled eyes.


Comment by Lara M

July 24th 2007 23:21
...saw pieces of my dream, flitting through my mind.
I closed my eyes to return to that dreamland...

Comment by Chic Critique

July 25th 2007 07:42
...was annoyed that my husband had woken me up so bloody early.

Sorry - I'm not good at poetry. Good idea though. Maybe tomorrow I'll feel more inclined to something that meets literary standards. Obviously need more sleep.

Comment by Lily

July 25th 2007 09:36
When i woke up this morning, I ..........?

wondered what land this was
that lay before my dream-filled eyes.


so i pulled up my bedsocks and wandered
down a pebbled road with a gemstone in my shoe


Comment by Lily

July 25th 2007 09:43
When i woke up this morning, I ..........?

...saw pieces of my dream, flitting through my mind.
I closed my eyes to return to that dreamland...


for i had not yet bundled up the firewood
and was missing a flame and a storyteller


Comment by Lily

July 25th 2007 09:56
When i woke up this morning, I ..........?

...was annoyed that my husband
had woken me up so bloody early.


I furrowed my brow adding to the crease left on my face by the twisted sheets. I said to my bloody husband, "you know, there are birds outside catching worms, take a look and lock up that chook".



no standards CC, doesn't have to be poetic. i liked your reply, made me giggle...


Comment by Kleonaptra

July 26th 2007 01:16
When I woke up this morning I......
Waited for the pain,
She was there, but
Much more fair

So I recounted,
My dream,
Come back!
Oh, contentment,

Why are you just a dream?

Comment by Lara M

July 26th 2007 03:52
Thanks Lily! LOVE the *ending*

Comment by Optomistic Opportunism

July 28th 2007 06:59
... noticed the time and felt guilty
had a whine and started acting silly...

still slightly drunk, fumbling for some jazzfunk,
wondering why I ended the night at a crunk club

... realised there was no-one sleeping next to me,
to tell me my breath stunk...

Comment by Lily

July 29th 2007 12:05
When I woke up this morning I......
Waited for the pain,
She was there, but
Much more fair

So I recounted,
My dream,
Come back!
Oh, contentment,

Why are you just a dream?


Am i dreaming you
or are you dreaming me?
let's sit on the beach
and watch the final colours





Comment by Lily

July 29th 2007 12:08
thanks Lara, my pleasure
i like toes..

~Lily



Comment by Lily

July 29th 2007 12:13
When i woke up this morning, I ..........?

... noticed the time and felt guilty
had a whine and started acting silly...

still slightly drunk, fumbling for some jazzfunk,
wondering why I ended the night at a crunk club

... realised there was no-one sleeping next to me,
to tell me my breath stunk...


suddenly i was itchy all over so i pulled
back the covers and found i was sharing
my bed with a box of barbeque snacks
and a lollipop stuck to my toe




Comment by Mountain Fog

August 3rd 2007 05:40
When i woke up this morning,

I rolled over again,
cuddled by my comfy,
cloud like doona,
I float -drifted through,
the haze of mind's gaze,
twinkling like twilight,
on the horizon of,
my waking mind.

Comment by Lily

August 21st 2007 07:53
When i woke up this morning,

I rolled over again,
cuddled by my comfy,
cloud like doona,
I float -drifted through,
the haze of mind's gaze,
twinkling like twilight,
on the horizon of,
my waking mind.


I hovered there
above the sea of dreams
still wet from her immersion
the horizon peeped open
one eye, one look and i'm
tumbling into her iris





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