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Ars Poetica - by Lily

freefalling................

April 16th 2007 08:55
turn off the lights
the fires in the sky
are about to light up
be still be still
and feel the wonder
of the soul explosion
in the same sky
where birds tuck in their wings
and glide on the midday breezes
when they flew north
and the eastern oaks
waved to the moon
pink glasses are not in fashion
because they fog up
with the steam that rises
from the grates
in the hot street
limelights get hot
after a while

~Lily
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Comment by DuskDevi

April 16th 2007 14:33
Wow...

~Lily love...while I can't pretend to comprehend the message of this...I can absorb the sensation...

I will say it again.

You are a visual poet.
You make us connect.

Comment by Ash

April 17th 2007 08:59
Lovely Lily,

I have Bob Marley and Lauryn Hill playing gently in the background.... this just wizzed me off to a wonderland.... sigh... how glad am I that you are back gerl!

turn off the lights
the fires in the sky
are about to light up

ash

Comment by Wendi

April 18th 2007 04:47
Ooooohhhh:

and feel the wonder
of the soul explosion

Love the use of color here.

W

Comment by Lily

April 20th 2007 00:24
here's some words that come to mind when i read this poem back;

anticipation, wonder, fringe-dweller, sunburn .. ha

some cannot connect Dusk ~smiles.. am grateful that you do..

love and thumps,

~Lily

Comment by Lily

April 20th 2007 00:26
glad to have wizzzzzed ya there with sigh Ash..
and to be back too..

love in Wonderland,
~Lily

Comment by Lily

April 20th 2007 00:28
oooooooh, Wendi, i like those lines too ~smile

rainbowic hugs,
~Lily


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