Give me the keys to Creation
September 16th 2007 06:57
hello poem….
this is the poem I wrote
when I was trying to write
a poem; if it’s a poem at all
it’s got strength in it
and love, lust and affection
it’s got lush green trees
and red soil, it’s got
highways and field paths
and birds and nests
it’s got rain puddles
sun shiny queens
and a verandah with a rocking chair
I feel thunder
The one I wrote yesteryear
had secrets of sleuths
and foreign hotels
it had strings and biting off tags
and sins, rages, jealousy
it had speeding cars
and swinging lights
bitten nails and fear
it had torn down fences
and a trickle down a chilled glass
~Lily
apologies for not getting back to replying to your comments on my other stuff.. my world is mad atm...
~L
this is the poem I wrote
when I was trying to write
a poem; if it’s a poem at all
it’s got strength in it
and love, lust and affection
it’s got lush green trees
and red soil, it’s got
highways and field paths
and birds and nests
it’s got rain puddles
sun shiny queens
and a verandah with a rocking chair
I feel thunder
The one I wrote yesteryear
had secrets of sleuths
and foreign hotels
it had strings and biting off tags
and sins, rages, jealousy
it had speeding cars
and swinging lights
bitten nails and fear
it had torn down fences
and a trickle down a chilled glass
~Lily
apologies for not getting back to replying to your comments on my other stuff.. my world is mad atm...
~L
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Comment by Ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
You have such beautiful thoughts.
and a trickle down a chilled glass
I really love those images.
I hope the whirlwind leaves your world soon with a fresh and cleared plate infront of you.
Hugs
Ash
Comment by JoH
When you find the keys to creation, maybe I could borrow them some time?
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
funny you should say that, it's been so so windy here, every day.. and yes, calm is the word of the day.. petitioned and welcome..
love,
~Lily
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
the title was a little pout at my muse.. indeed, this flowed in easy, but very few poems do...
~Lily
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
just bumble through with all yer might and loads of heart, i say..
~Lily