Images II; Heat Apple Night
January 17th 2007 05:03
I am a ruby tongue, a hot scorch
..I am a licked burn, a violent blister
....I inhale toxic fumes in an iron lung
I am a bloodied trap, a seductive apple
..I am a Judas noose, a pouch of worthless gold
....I swallow sin in one raping gulp
I am a hunched back, a permanent crease
..I am a loathed bed, a scalding bath
....I thrash in sheets of nightmare sweat
~Lily
..I am a licked burn, a violent blister
....I inhale toxic fumes in an iron lung
I am a bloodied trap, a seductive apple
..I am a Judas noose, a pouch of worthless gold
....I swallow sin in one raping gulp
I am a hunched back, a permanent crease
..I am a loathed bed, a scalding bath
....I thrash in sheets of nightmare sweat
~Lily
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Comment by Ash
Flashes of memories
I cannot choose a favourite one from these lines - - - all are equally as good as the rest.
Ash
Comment by Optomistic Opportunism
Japanese Jazz Funk
Optomystic Opportunism
So much to give in so little space
Your apples seem fresh, but if I take a bite, will I ever be forgiven?
To our dear friend Insomnia, I must agree that staying up late can be worth the wait, but I've still got to get up early.
Oh iron lung, you are but a mere survival tool, but where would I be if it wasn't for you?
Magic, Lily
Comment by Tracy
Movies and Life
I found the language and images you created striking ...therein lies the beauty for me, being touched by your words in its raw truth.
Tracy
Comment by DuskDevi
Rugby World Cup 2007
I can't say I fully comprehend the meaning, will need to reread and absorb, let my mind decipher it but...
The words...votre mots...they way you weave them...
.............seductive apple.....
I swallow sin in one raping gulp
.....[exhale].....
Comment ca va aujourd'hui...ce soir...non...ce matin?
Be well Reine ~Lily l'amour
Dusk
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
i love your reply Opto... the magic of musing
Dusk, there's nothing to decipher really... just lots of actions, flavours, textures, moods etc on a screen....
thanks for reading, peoplez....
Images III ----->>
~Lily
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