I am a ruby tongue, a hot scorch
..I am a licked burn, a violent blister
....I inhale toxic fumes in an iron lung

I am a bloodied trap, a seductive apple
..I am a Judas noose, a pouch of worthless gold
....I swallow sin in one raping gulp

I am a hunched back, a permanent crease
..I am a loathed bed, a scalding bath
....I thrash in sheets of nightmare sweat

~Lily

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Comment by Ash

January 17th 2007 05:27

Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories

This one certainly has a change on tone hey Lily!

I cannot choose a favourite one from these lines - - - all are equally as good as the rest.

Ash

Comment by Optomistic Opportunism

January 17th 2007 05:28

Bohemian Hiphop
Japanese Jazz Funk
Optomystic Opportunism

So much to say so little time...
So much to give in so little space
Your apples seem fresh, but if I take a bite, will I ever be forgiven?

To our dear friend Insomnia, I must agree that staying up late can be worth the wait, but I've still got to get up early.

Oh iron lung, you are but a mere survival tool, but where would I be if it wasn't for you?

Magic, Lily

Comment by Tracy

January 17th 2007 07:51

Movies and Life

Hi Lily

I found the language and images you created striking ...therein lies the beauty for me, being touched by your words in its raw truth.

Tracy

Comment by DuskDevi

January 18th 2007 14:44

Rugby World Cup 2007

~Lily l'amour...

I can't say I fully comprehend the meaning, will need to reread and absorb, let my mind decipher it but...

The words...votre mots...they way you weave them...

...ruby tongue...
.............seductive apple.....
I swallow sin in one raping gulp

.....[exhale].....

Comment ca va aujourd'hui...ce soir...non...ce matin?

Be well Reine ~Lily l'amour

Dusk

Comment by Lily

January 18th 2007 22:03

Ars Poetica

Many flavours to these Ash.. waterfall tones assured....

i love your reply Opto... the magic of musing

Dusk, there's nothing to decipher really... just lots of actions, flavours, textures, moods etc on a screen....

thanks for reading, peoplez....

Images III ----->>

~Lily
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