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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Images III; Prick Kiss Cloak

January 18th 2007 22:09
I am a bitten petal, a velvet spit
..I am a thorny mouth, a pristine prick
....I thrive in composts of pruned beauty

I am a needles eye, a steel statue
..I am a pricked finger, a blood kiss
....I weave loathed tears into my loom

I am a cut pattern, an unsewn cloak
..I am darting eyes, a hope seeker
....I swaddle a woven heart before a loud clock

~Lily
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Comment by Ash

January 19th 2007 06:03


Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
My thoughts on your words?
......
A sad beauty
Miniscule and yet so big
Unfinished and empty
Yet so much more than anything else
Despair? Unconventional?


ils sont tres belle, votre mots. ils sont tres, tres vrai


(my french is a little rusty but it sounds a lot better than it would in english - you get my drift )

au revoir
Ash

Comment by Lily

January 19th 2007 07:21


Ars Poetica
Ash, i love it that you form your feelings after reading with reflection ....thank you sweets... i get it i get it, you help me get it ...

~ilLily

Comment by Ash

January 19th 2007 07:45


Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
they are your words Lily, just how I feel about them I think poetry has to be read a few times for it to be understood, not just like skimming over text.
Poets must choose their words carefully, they have to be the perfect ones to instill the feelings they desire....you do that well....
you get it!!!

ash

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