Images IV; Sit Snip Bolt
January 22nd 2007 07:53
I am winter in summer, an abandoned barn
..I am a muddy yard, a one hinged gate
....I sit heavily on rotting oaken rungs
I am a snipped flower, a dug up root
..I am an unplayed drum, a netherworld rhythm
....I dance bare to a snow capped mountain
I am a bolting mare, a perilous ride
..I am a laboured pant, a wild eyed breath
....I wade in rivers with the colts of serendipity
~Lily
..I am a muddy yard, a one hinged gate
....I sit heavily on rotting oaken rungs
I am a snipped flower, a dug up root
..I am an unplayed drum, a netherworld rhythm
....I dance bare to a snow capped mountain
I am a bolting mare, a perilous ride
..I am a laboured pant, a wild eyed breath
....I wade in rivers with the colts of serendipity
~Lily
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Comment by Ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
loving the opening line.
Although a sad tone you sound free in this one, floating around the place. All these images conjure up beautiful scenes to me, lonely, sad, but beautiful too. I think this is your best Lily!
*hugs*
Ash
Comment by katyzzz
Photography Tips
MS Paint Art
Mrs. M.s Love and stuff,
katyzzz
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
katyzzz.. spirit and revolt, well probably, no - make that definitlilly.. control? naught!! .. life dishes out whatever's in the pot... fresh or off... thanks for the lovenstuff...
cool, glad more than fuckun sorrow was seen...
oh i wrote that >< thought i was just thinkin' it ... outta hear
~Lily