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Ars Poetica - January 2007

Images IV; Sit Snip Bolt

January 22nd 2007 07:53
I am winter in summer, an abandoned barn
..I am a muddy yard, a one hinged gate
....I sit heavily on rotting oaken rungs

I am a snipped flower, a dug up root
..I am an unplayed drum, a netherworld rhythm
....I dance bare to a snow capped mountain

I am a bolting mare, a perilous ride
..I am a laboured pant, a wild eyed breath
....I wade in rivers with the colts of serendipity

~Lily
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Comment by Ash

January 22nd 2007 08:19


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Flashes of memories
I am winter in summer, an abandoned barn

loving the opening line.

Although a sad tone you sound free in this one, floating around the place. All these images conjure up beautiful scenes to me, lonely, sad, but beautiful too. I think this is your best Lily!

*hugs*

Ash

Comment by katyzzz

January 22nd 2007 08:24


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I like this too, Lily, I pick up the spirited movement, the revolt and your control, I don't see sadness, but maybe I'm missing that. Although I see the hardness that life has dished out.

Mrs. M.s Love and stuff,

katyzzz

Comment by Lily

January 23rd 2007 09:53


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thanks so much to you, the beautiful Ash .. my heart and soul in these... big bear hugs to ya gerl... embrasse belle

katyzzz.. spirit and revolt, well probably, no - make that definitlilly.. control? naught!! .. life dishes out whatever's in the pot... fresh or off... thanks for the lovenstuff...

cool, glad more than fuckun sorrow was seen...
oh i wrote that >< thought i was just thinkin' it ... outta hear

~Lily

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