In celebration of the new Comet...
and for Ash...

Images V

I am a silence, a clear sky gaze
..I am faded coral, a thirsty wave
....I draw water from a salty bay

I am an embryo, a red liquid love
..I am a star’s afterbirth, a roaming vapour
....I ride on the whip of a comet tail ................

I am a pasture line, a boundary of trees
..I am a smooth pebble, a fire circle
....I line the graves of resting spirits

~Lily

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Comment by DuskDevi

January 15th 2007 10:55

Rugby World Cup 2007

Hell yeah!!!!!!

Waiting....pour les autres....

~Lily love....

I ride on the whip of a comet tail

...so you.

Dusk

Comment by Ash

January 15th 2007 11:07

Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories

Letting you know - - - bring on the others please!!!

I find this to be well - balanced - a hint of sadness tinged with a hint of joy tinged with a hint of neutral emotion, very good word use Lily.

I am a silence, a clear sky gaze

my favourite line.

waiting........

Comment by Ash

January 15th 2007 11:40

Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories

Thanks for the dedication, Lily *hugs* I am glad I get to see this one, not hiding by the clouds or on the other side of the country like the other!

Comment by Lily

January 15th 2007 12:12

Ars Poetica

sorry for my tardy ass.. i had to wait for myspace and goldenwolfen to have their run with the gerls...

Dusk, Ash

i swear the quoteds are BOTH my favourite lines in this one.. this series; is poetry of mine i can honestly say that i like.. wrote them in hmm 2003, maybe 4

seeings though my muse has pulled down her SHUTTERS, pfft .. I'll post 'Images I' and one a day after that, keep em keen or hangin' or something like that..

you're welcome Ash, nice to imagine it whipping across the sky, after the clouds kissed

~Lily

Comment by Tracy

January 15th 2007 20:21

Movies and Life

Beautiful, I'd love to read some more

)

Comment by Lily

January 15th 2007 20:30

Ars Poetica

thank yous Tracy... more on the horizon...

)

~Lily

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