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Images VIII; Crystal Death Feather Diamond Jigsaw Twilight

January 25th 2007 13:38
twilight girl
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I am a mild season, a crystal branch
..I am a heartbeat, a breath from death
....I skip rope in doorways of grief

I am a mother, an ivy cling
..I am a tail feather, a diamond bird
....I fly close to my joy fledglings

I am a smash, a million drops
..I am a clutter, a leaf-strewn yard
....I piece jigsaws in the twilight

.............the end, fin

~Lily
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Comment by Ash

January 25th 2007 20:39
Loving the photo.....beee-yooo-tee-ful Lily!!

In everything good there is something bad
and
In everything bad there is something good

you got the balance going Lily,

Life. Love. Protection. Beauty. Admiration......

fin? are you sure? You`re like, older, ya know, in a non-wrinkled sort of way? Like, you must, like, have so much deep stuff to say...about life and everything.

I am....going to miss this series...been a lovely journey, ups and downs...

*crowd begings to chant....we want more! we want more....*

Comment by Lily

January 26th 2007 04:14
laffin' ... more to come kindred, like, it brims up from the neverending waterhole... shame it's not real water, the garden would thank me more....

thanks for coming along with me on the journey Ash
pleasure, mine

~Lily

Comment by DuskDevi

January 28th 2007 21:59
Oh My Good Goddess.

~Lily....beautiful.

Comment by Lily

January 29th 2007 02:58
thanks Dusk, which goddess?

~Lily

Comment by Lily

February 2nd 2007 12:56
Life. Love. Protection. Beauty. Admiration......

Ash; kindred; dear~heart; lover of beauty, and all that surrounds..

you gots me wondering, could you write a poem with that line in it? those five words?.. are begging to sail a boat together.. (perdy please?.. i promise i'll write a poem in reply)

~Lily
smiles (because you always make me..)
<3

Comment by Ash

February 2nd 2007 14:24
hey Lily...
I just logged in - mind a wandering tonight - to get your message....hhhmmm a poem with those 5 words in? oh my word you have no idea the meaning of those words in my life right now!
I shall attempt this dear heart..... I will be back....

*hugs ta ya gerl*

Comment by Ash

February 2nd 2007 16:20
as promised lovely lily///
this is what it means to me...

I hope you enjoy it -
with many hugs
kindred
kind soul
lover of beauty
wise one
of few
words


may the collection of letters
and accumulation of words
be to your liking

*hugs*
ash

Comment by Lily

February 3rd 2007 07:21
i'ma working on my as promised reply..

hugs to ya,
~Lily

Comment by Lilla

February 6th 2007 10:49
Hi LIly,

just flitting by to see how you're swim back to shore is going...

What a gorgeous photo Lily... beautiful, innocent, wild... I love it, and your words...

I am a mother, an ivy cling
..I am a tail feather, a diamond bird
....I fly close to my joy fledglings

Flying right beside you there...

Soar high...

L..i..l..l..a

Comment by Lily

February 6th 2007 11:16
hi L..i..l..l..a

i'm clambering back to shore, slowly.. thanks sweets...
but my joy fledglings always make me soar high..

love to ya,
~Lily

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