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Ars Poetica - December 2007

Little Glitters

December 23rd 2007 21:36
The exit was young, the entrance was old.
Three dark smiles clutch at shadows
in a land of new moon and whisper
heavy clouds are plummeting all over the place!

Time’s grace takes hold of a hand
that once held promise. Scores of balloons
released to navigate their way out from
the stings of haunting, from the need for air

When light forsook dusk, little glitters
lingered in the hearts of children

And what remains is a sparkle in the eye
of a child, who sees only trees in evergreen
and open roads, blind to folly; seizing faith
in wishes to bolster a colossal, jaded heart.

And dreams, timeless and tethered
lead them on.




~Lily






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Comment by Michaelie

December 24th 2007 05:04


Flick Wit
Just lovely, Lilly.

Michaelie

Comment by Mountain Fog

December 27th 2007 06:31


Infognito
nice musicality to this gurrl..and imagery...and I suspect metaphore, bit cryptic in parts but that adds to its spice I think.

cheers

and have a fab New Years!

fog

Comment by Anonymous

December 27th 2007 07:20
Sweet. Plain ole sweet stuff...

Keisha

Comment by Lily

December 27th 2007 08:06


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
thanks for the look in Michaelie

thankU fog gurl, have a grandocious new year yourself.. cheers..

thanks Keisha..




~Lily

Comment by The Rusty Can

December 29th 2007 05:22


The Rusty Can
very pretty~

Rusty.

Comment by Lily

January 8th 2008 07:27


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
thankU Rusty..

~Lily

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