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Ars Poetica - by Lily

lover - George

November 22nd 2006 13:07


hair of black silk
across her shoulder
my lips slide
fingers find fire
as they glide
from ear to breast
on down her side
the rise of hip
fall of thigh
did I wake her
did she sigh
my lover sleeps
at my side
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Comment by Mrs M

November 22nd 2006 23:32
You have a way!

Lily, I clicked on the vote button but the number of votes didn't change from 5. I tried to vote again but it wouldn't let me. Just thought you should know.

Comment by Lily

November 23rd 2006 01:30
Hi Mrs M, thanks for letting me know, votes don't really bother me...

George aka Bullamakanka wrote this one..
isn't it beautiful?

most sensuous in the falling...
you capture with brevity George.. a talent i admire!

~Lily

Comment by DuskDevi

November 23rd 2006 13:43
~Lily love...is this you?

The only brevity I am capable of is this...sigh...but tis a lengthy sigh....

Dusk

...clove and honey and coffee...is what your look smells like to me...

Comment by DuskDevi

November 24th 2006 04:43
Bonjour Reine ~Lily l'amour...comment ca va aujourd'hui?

Just came to rest here...there is much owing and froing and an undercurrent of anger everywhere else on Orble...thought I should come to a place of beauty...

Dusk

Comment by Lily

November 24th 2006 04:57
To the vibrant and eclectic ms Dusk...

you're welcome to hang out with me anytime, me luverly .. i've been flat out like a lizard drinking (although that sounds better than what i've been dealing with) and haven't had time to do the things i love.. though i did get to talk to my beautiful man AND i got a pay rise -- how GOOD is that!!, i am smiling inside and out... PLUS it's friday with one hour and 3 minutes to go, but who's counting lol ..... just ME!!!

I have an awesome 'stroll to cosmos' write coming up, a collaboration; i just have to get the go ahead

btw, i live on coffee, sometimes when i'm feeling like being good to myself, i'll put honey in it instead of sugar; but i balk at cloves...

~lILY (CAPS OFF) lol

~Lily

Comment by Lily

November 24th 2006 05:05
George, I am coming back to comment on your poem.. I only got to listen to the 1st poem last night and want to listen to 'lover' specifically. I understand where the art comes from now... thank you so much for the CD.. you have a lovely speaking voice ...i'm learning...

~Lily

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