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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Morning Traffic

January 26th 2007 04:36
no sugar?
unsweetened
reluctant drinker
two angels asleep
hung on the door
their swanny wings
no blankets
the heat of the night
blanket enough
------------------------
it's barely light
outside, the glow
of a screen, alive
huge curly lashes
blinking blinking
i pull mine out
scrape off
the boot polish
between bitten
finger nails
------------------------
two pictures
in a corner
behind a door
with christmas beads
thrown carelessly
at their feet
and medicine medicine
we wait to die
------------------------
in the mean while
i direct mind traffic
i see it streaming
out of my ears
i let it go
i let it go


~Lily
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Comment by Ash

January 26th 2007 06:36
therapeutically simple and chaotically relaxing.

the heat of the night
blanket enough...

particularly like the last stanza...sometimes feels like an interstate highway up there doesn`t it?

life is so quiet
yet complexity dwells
in the depths of
......ones mind......
to meet the noise
of the outside
voices that
constantly chatter
......and groan
and float sweetly
on tainted air


hope you are having a particularly sweet day

<<<<<<<<blinking blinking>>>>>>>>>
Ash

Comment by Lily

January 26th 2007 12:50
voices?
outside?
inside?
the permeating air
that greets me
in the poke prod dawn?
a hundred poems could never
touch it...

constantly chatter
......and groan
and float sweetly
on tainted air


if they could but change the air Ash ...

~Lily

now playing: Boom Boom Ba ~ Metisse
Kélé, filla, saba, nani, norou
Can you hear my heart beat in this world?



>>>>>>>>>blink blink <<<<<<<<<<


Comment by Optomistic Opportunism

January 27th 2007 12:59
Another gorgeous poem.

May Athena Bright Eyes bless you with many a muse in which to share with the world...

Les Nu' for life

Comment by Lily

January 27th 2007 13:48
Merci Opto...

may your cotton socks be blessed off...

~Lily

Comment by Optomistic Opportunism

January 27th 2007 14:13
Hopefully they won't smell...

May your future be a fusion of fresh funky flowers dipped in frozen fruit juice...

Comment by Lily

January 27th 2007 14:20
awww haha.... thank youuuu Opto.. that was beautiful...

smiles...

~Lily

Comment by pegasus

February 6th 2007 03:16
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous

Comment by Lily

February 7th 2007 11:29
thanks muchly, o winged one ..
your tag is gorgeous.. (gorjess)

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~Lily

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