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Ars Poetica - by Lily

No Ordinary Breath

December 9th 2006 15:00
An Ordinary??

No Ordinary Breath

I am not afraid
resurrections are like orbits
back to the beginning
past the grave, beyond death
elysium fields have the prettiest flowers
and i breathe with the dark lords there
no ordinary breath

in exhale, i enter the beautiful worlds
swim warm oceans, travel the vast land
meet creatures of many kind
look, they include me

i escaped from a secret place
and felt providence push
green air into the lungs of destiny
carrying me, whispering
that i was born to be here
in the afterglow of supernovas
ride the comet tail whips
be free

we survived with love in our hearts
not killed or noosed or ripped away
sacred i hold
and worship with smile
love of love
and love itself...


~Lily

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Comment by katyzzz

December 10th 2006 23:24
Lily,

I love your poetry, I love to absorb it and feel tranquil when I visit it, that's why I've not been here before.

But now I can do it justice and one day I shall have your book of poems so I can look back on it and recall..

Keep up with it in a barren world.

katyzzz

Comment by Bullamakanka

December 11th 2006 09:51
Lilly

That's poetry.

George

Comment by LaurenD

December 11th 2006 09:57
Just beautiful, Lily. Thank you.

LaurenD

Comment by Lily

December 11th 2006 11:43
katyzzz..

i am so glad you find peace here...
a barren world leads to the seeking of creation..

~*~

George,

a most generous compliment, thank yooouuu...

~*~

Lauren,

you are most welcome....


~Lily

suggestions for art?...
which line/s shall i paint




Comment by MelissaA

December 12th 2006 01:10
* * : ) * *

Comment by Lilla

December 12th 2006 02:20

Comment by Lily

December 12th 2006 21:08
MelissaA .. thassa pretty sparkly smile you got going on there ... thanks for it...

Lilla .. thank ((((you))))

~Lily

Comment by MelissaA

December 13th 2006 09:13
* * : ) * * Lily. : )

Comment by Lily

December 13th 2006 10:16
* * * *
Melissa's smiles
rain upon the lily
...gracefully
received
* * * *

~Lily

Comment by MelissaA

December 13th 2006 10:28
How sweet. : )

Comment by JoshZ

December 13th 2006 12:16
Beautiful Lilly.

Comment by Claire C

December 15th 2006 05:50
So powerful, I especially liked the last verse.And cheers for being my first comment on orble lol!

Comment by Lily

December 18th 2006 21:08
Melissa, you are sweet too * * * *

Josh, many thaaaanks

Claire C, the tail is the guider ..cheers..

~Lily

Comment by Moonbeam

January 2nd 2007 23:27
Lilly,
U must glide along on a current of peacefulness.
Your poetry is indeed soothing to a tired soul; the poultice on a raw wound. Absolutely devine!
I believe u have great potential for writing guided meditations.
Keep wielding that pen........
Always, Moonbeam

Comment by Lily

January 2nd 2007 23:45
many thanks moonbeam,

to share the beauty i see, to help heal with words? .. brings me peace.. but make no mistake, i am a tormented soul..

~Lily

Comment by Kleonaptra

February 26th 2007 01:36
So nice to meet someone who remembers before and after they were born....Longing wistfully for the peace of floating throught nebulae, yet afraid still to lose this existance, this NOW, which will never come again, while the worlds beyond worlds remain forever....

Comment by Lily

February 26th 2007 02:55
wow, that was really deep Kleonpatra, but i understood every word, especially ~ 'this NOW, which will never come again' .. merci for those words, and thank you for sitting under the poet-tree...

~Lily

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