notagoodday
April 15th 2007 21:03
Flamingos like to stand on one leg and can sleep like that, and hippos are the most dangerous animals in the world because they're so heavy, according to dr dolittle aka the daughtie
it wasn't a good day
when he backed me in a corner
and helped me play victim
no it wasn't a good day
when he crushed every
thing we had between us
with his gloved iron fist
i tried to tell him i need gentle
i tried to tell him i needed him
~Lily
when he backed me in a corner
and helped me play victim
no it wasn't a good day
when he crushed every
thing we had between us
with his gloved iron fist
i tried to tell him i need gentle
i tried to tell him i needed him
~Lily
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Comment by Wendi
This raises the hairs on my arms... and not in such a great way. The writing is great (of course)... but the memories it draws forth are... well, icky.
:::hugs:::
Good morning, Lily.
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
don't fret, tis inspired from a happening in a far away land... but written fresh this morning...
fuck, writing is catharctic ..
~Lily
Comment by Wendi
Oh, gurl.... ya got that
writeright! There are a lot of memories from my past that I will try to heal through writing... but then there are those that are best left buried in their internal graves.Glad to see you
rightingwriting!Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
~smiles at you
glad TO be writing Wendi.. i'm miserable when i CAN'T...
i feel like a dam filling when i DON'T.. (caps for emphasis not shouting) *wink .. i must write out more often...
staggers off for coffee..
~Lily
Comment by Wendi
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
sorry, can't blame the coffee for this little black duck..
wondering where 'off yer damn rocker' actually comes from, means.. am always curious about the origin of phrases...
speaking of fishy, ever heard of cats choking on fish bones? hehehe .. aah i know you wouldn't eat me.. wouldja, WOULDJA? .. laffin' here <--- wouldn't want you to think i wuz seer-ious..
fuck i ramble (and cuss) in the mornings .. laughs
and it aint the coffee, i suurwear
Comment by Wendi
*WICKED LAUGHTER*
*GIGGLES*
Oh, it hurts... make it stop!
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
throwin in chuckles and grins...
Comment by Wendi
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
Comment by DuskDevi
Rugby World Cup 2007
Sorry...tis the testrogen in me...my fists curl when I read something like this...as beautifully presented as the poem is...the content...ugly.
Comment ca va aujourd'hui?
I like flamingos!!
Dusk
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
you connected with the poem then, my reward, oui ?
for you ~
mush and thumps,
~Lily
Comment by DuskDevi
Rugby World Cup 2007
They're beautiful!
when he crushed every
thing we had between us
...this...I recognise this....a distant memory but still...
Your poems Reine...they make us connect...
much warmth
Dusk
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
a friend once told me, tears and roses are a poet's reward... me thinks they be right... though i would add smiles to that list...
I'd put up a pic of a hippo, but i don't like em as much.. smiles...
~Lily
Comment by Tracy
Movies and Life
It's good to see you, I was wondering how you were last week.
This poem is deeply affecting, as usual your words are beautiful and powerful but the content brought tears.
Sendng you best wishes,
Tracy
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
Good to see you back too gurl, got your doodle up yet?
i've been away mending.. in more ways than one.. the balms are out and the white flag flies..
~Lily
Comment by Tracy
Movies and Life
No doodle or noodle....no luck with it yet and for some reason I can't log into my own blog to answer other people's comments.....so I'm flitting all over the place dropping into as many as I can which is fun.......
I like the description of mending the self.....it gives hope and describes it as a process which to me, it is...
Byeee,
Tracy
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
And Oh, ouch, I know that victim game...So hard, for a strong woman who writes intelligent and moving prose, who is respected and loved and rules her world....
To get pushed and backed into a corner and made someones prey....
Why is it some people have the power to just steal all you predatory viciousness and make you cower and say "Dont hurt me...Please"
Ive mentioned my experiences on Lillas dream interpretation, but not quite brave enough to write about it yet....
He might find out and come looking for me.
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
I can't answer your questions Kleo, but i will say when it does happen, it's a very painful thing, melting everything solid.
Later, i will shimmy on over to Lilla's blog and read of your dream. You could write about it and write under a pseudonym? or just write for you, for the release
..smile. I hope you can be brave one day Kleo, there are huge rewards for it.
love and a posy of violets,
~Lily
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
that's the best thing i've read all day....
glad you're having fun
~Lily
Comment by Ash
Flashes of memories
So good you have found the muse again....
this angers me, to the point of suffocation! what doesn`t kill you makes you stronger... so they say... and you are a strong one...
ash
Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner
A very moving post..made my skin crawl..have seen that sorta thing in action, and it rasies the hairs on the back of my neck...
I hope whomever you're writing about gets out of that siutation before she gets truly hurt...
Even though it was beautifuly written, it made me grate my teeth...sorry...I too have had too much coffee this morning lol
Take care,
Nick
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
I did....'Inner Caverns' but I dont recommend reading it, its garbage. You are listed as the sole inspiration!
Woops, sorry, that just came out all wrong...I didnt mean that. I mean my writing was garbage but you inspired me to delve into a place I usually forget. And I dont really want to forget, I want to remember so I dont fall into a similar trap...
Im so damn paranoid over writing it, I had to change my post pic!
And I have wanted a peacock for so long, the stud manager kept two, and I miss their mournful cries...For some reason, farms with peacocks are extra peaceful.
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
'fuck, writing is catharctic ..'
deserves repeating
autumn embrasse,
~Lily
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
Situation undone. To know someone has been moved by my words?.. is treasured by me. Thank you so much..
with latte,
~Lily
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
Perhaps you can let me judge where 'Inner Caverns' is garbage or not? Actually, rewind, I don't see any poetry as garbage, it's all worthy to be in the house of life, because it comes from the heart.
Memories are good to air and keep close.. in the words of Wendi, so glad you are
writingrighting into the breeze.... btw, i love the title already...Peacocks ~sigh~ fascinating creatures.. i didn't know they cry mournfully..
with a gallop to Various Excerpts of Angst,
~Lily
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
Your great.
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
i'll be back later to comment on Inner Caverns..ok
in the meantime, big humungous warm Lily hugs to ya...
~Lily