Once upon a time
May 18th 2007 13:45
Once upon a time
there was an end
skipping rope laughter
and dragons in the sky days
are over
child, your hood frames a struck face
Where was your guide?
when you jumped onto trains
without drivers
forgot to read the destination sign
stepping off onto stations
laying eyes upon souls
you never imagined existed
we rang the mercy bells
pulling tight your strings
The enchanted ones
the beautiful hands
that held out treats
then beat upon your cherishes
with incensed deception
I scrubbed your skin raw
trying to rid
you
of the qualms that stained
we stitched madly
you, undone
they didn't believe you could walk again
You locked an ember in a dark room
and scars keep you within their reach
please
Shells are not tempted by honey
and band aids soak off in water
drown me baby....
~Lily
there was an end
skipping rope laughter
and dragons in the sky days
are over
child, your hood frames a struck face
Where was your guide?
when you jumped onto trains
without drivers
forgot to read the destination sign
stepping off onto stations
laying eyes upon souls
you never imagined existed
we rang the mercy bells
pulling tight your strings
The enchanted ones
the beautiful hands
that held out treats
then beat upon your cherishes
with incensed deception
I scrubbed your skin raw
trying to rid
you
of the qualms that stained
we stitched madly
you, undone
they didn't believe you could walk again
You locked an ember in a dark room
and scars keep you within their reach
please
Shells are not tempted by honey
and band aids soak off in water
drown me baby....
~Lily
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Comment by charliesgirl_992000
Histeries, Mysteries and what not
Lifes little slices
Mystical Creativity
and dragons in the sky days
over....."
i LOVE how this sounds when you say it over and over!!
i love what you write!!
Tammy
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
Have a beaut weekend with the familee....
~Lily
Comment by Cinty
Euthanasia Views
Warm regards,
Cinty
Comment by Ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
when you jumped onto trains
without drivers
forgot to read the destination sign
stepping off onto stations
I so get this!
Interesting visuals Lily.
hugs to ya
ash
and scars keep you within their reach
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
warmth to you in return
~Lily
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
pieces of it are to me too Ash .. smiles
a few have picked out the ember and scars part ..
as long as there's an ember...
and scars caution, oui?
love'n'hugs your way
~Lily
Comment by Kylar
Nice post by the way, fairly enjoyable also.
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
smiles...
~Lily
Comment by Lilla
From The Home Front
Enviro Warrior
Dream Herald
Esoteric Bookshop
*puffing *
I finally made it.. it's murder out there *lol* I like your front page layout...although I wasn't sure which end was up..so chose the top as the latest....*holding breath* Yeah success!
I loved this poem.. I love the cryptic tone, particularly the piece Ash highlighted. THis is interesting and I can feel it on many levels...
I saw colours as I read it, blues and Yesllow, reds and pupsley...I loved the ending.
nice and I hope Monday is too. Good Luck
Let us know your progress.
Lilla ...
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
heh, is that the new black?
when the Orble elves set this blog up, the home page was already set up like that, i thought 'cooooool'
thanks for puffing in off the dance floor, and feeling the textures...
(i find out early next week about the job, wondering if you've heard about yours yet?)
love,
~Lily