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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Once upon a time

May 18th 2007 13:45
Once upon a time
there was an end

skipping rope laughter
and dragons in the sky days
are over
child, your hood frames a struck face

Where was your guide?
when you jumped onto trains
without drivers
forgot to read the destination sign

stepping off onto stations
laying eyes upon souls
you never imagined existed

we rang the mercy bells
pulling tight your strings

The enchanted ones
the beautiful hands
that held out treats
then beat upon your cherishes
with incensed deception

I scrubbed your skin raw
trying to rid
you
of the qualms that stained

we stitched madly
you, undone

they didn't believe you could walk again

You locked an ember in a dark room
and scars keep you within their reach

please

Shells are not tempted by honey
and band aids soak off in water
drown me baby....


~Lily
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Comment by charliesgirl_992000

May 18th 2007 15:57
"...skipping rope laughter
and dragons in the sky days
over....."

i LOVE how this sounds when you say it over and over!!
i love what you write!!
Tammy

Comment by Lily

May 18th 2007 22:25
thanks Tammy gurl... fond of your own writings mahself... wondering if you write poetry?

Have a beaut weekend with the familee....

~Lily

Comment by Cinty

May 19th 2007 18:27
Beautifully written Lily!

Warm regards,
Cinty

Comment by Ash

May 20th 2007 01:47
Very cryptic Lily,

Where was your guide?
when you jumped onto trains
without drivers
forgot to read the destination sign
stepping off onto stations

I so get this!

Interesting visuals Lily.

hugs to ya

ash

You locked an ember in a dark room
and scars keep you within their reach

Comment by Lily

May 20th 2007 01:58
many thanks Cinty...
warmth to you in return

~Lily

Comment by Lily

May 20th 2007 02:08
Very cryptic Lily,

pieces of it are to me too Ash .. smiles

a few have picked out the ember and scars part ..
as long as there's an ember...
and scars caution, oui?

love'n'hugs your way
~Lily

Comment by Kylar

May 20th 2007 11:29
I hear the faint kicking of baby Bohemians United. Is she due soon?

Nice post by the way, fairly enjoyable also.

Comment by Lily

May 20th 2007 11:55
with the help of your midwifery encourages to push, i am birthing as we speak.. thanks for pursuing the vision...

smiles...

~Lily

Comment by Lilla

June 15th 2007 08:33
~Lily Pily,

*puffing *

I finally made it.. it's murder out there *lol* I like your front page layout...although I wasn't sure which end was up..so chose the top as the latest....*holding breath* Yeah success!

I loved this poem.. I love the cryptic tone, particularly the piece Ash highlighted. THis is interesting and I can feel it on many levels...

I saw colours as I read it, blues and Yesllow, reds and pupsley...I loved the ending.

nice and I hope Monday is too. Good Luck

Let us know your progress.

Lilla ...

Comment by Lily

June 20th 2007 11:35
Hi Lilla
pupsley

heh, is that the new black?

when the Orble elves set this blog up, the home page was already set up like that, i thought 'cooooool'

thanks for puffing in off the dance floor, and feeling the textures...

(i find out early next week about the job, wondering if you've heard about yours yet?)

love,
~Lily


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