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Ars Poetica - by Lily

One Eye Open

July 22nd 2007 22:23
Hey Missy Muse
where the hell are you?
i've been waiting up all night
your bed's unslept in

tossed, turned, one eye open

when you walk through
that door, i am going to
rummage through your bags
and see where you've been

and make you sit and tell
of all the worlds you seen

teach me

come on, come on, come on
cable is starting to bore me
and the world is trying to whore me

without further adieu

if you can hear me from here
bring me back some high art
a clean start

a benign heart


~Lily

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Comment by DuskDevi

July 22nd 2007 23:49
I know that this is frustration and a tinge of sadness... but...the humour...makes me feel your Muse never really leaves you without her resi-dew...'one i open'....

Big hugs ~Lily l'amour...

Dusk


Comment by Lily

July 23rd 2007 00:03
She usually has a bottle of mist with the top off laying about somewhere..

trust you are well Crépuscule..

embrasse,
~Lily


Comment by Kleonaptra

July 23rd 2007 01:32
Love it! I empathize whole heartedly.....Stuck with my poetry muse when the novel muse is on extended vacation...

Comment by Ash

July 23rd 2007 10:58
Hey Lily

Them muses have got into the Pina Colada`s I`m telling you! When yours gets back please send mine home too - we have some chatting of our own to do!

In the meantime we can have Pina Colada`s of our own....

hugs
ash

Comment by Lily

July 23rd 2007 11:11
Kleo, feed your poetry muse and the novel muse will get curious. btw, poetry muses demand ambrosia from far and reaching lands.

:::hugs:::

~Lily




Comment by Lily

July 23rd 2007 11:13
Ash,

They haven't even called home, ET call home!!!

cheers Y*Y
~Lily

Comment by Kleonaptra

July 26th 2007 01:13
Lily flower,
Ive noticed. Its funny, I never ever wanted to write poetry now its all I can manage!

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