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Ars Poetica - January 2007

One Feather

January 27th 2007 13:44
one feather
one soft feather


one soft feather
hanging in the breeze
caught upon a weed

~Lily

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Comment by Ash

January 27th 2007 13:47


Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
violet colours
shining amongst the green
which try to choke it
and pull it down
But it is strong
and it`s feathery
fingers cling
...tight...
...strong....



beautiful, as always Lily

late night wishes of peace and happy dreams
xxx

Comment by Lily

January 27th 2007 13:54


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
so fragile it was
beckoning my eye
i thought the wind
to catch it and carry
it off at any moment
but it clung on.. strong
i wondered if it had
fluttered from the sky
shed, not needed anymore
or if a bird had brushed by
the ready weeds

thanks Ash.. for your words, for you....

~Lily


Comment by Ash

January 27th 2007 14:00


Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
it was like watching a
flower cry
shedding its petals
tears that fell from
the sky
feathers that fell from
the bird
as it flew by
its tears not
felt but its feathers....



noticed!


NO! Thank YOU Lily

X



Comment by katyzzz

January 27th 2007 21:02


Photography Tips
Health Focus
Poetry Lighthouse
MS Paint Art
Lily,

The picture and the poem are in harmony and symphony. Symbolic.

katyzzz

Comment by Lily

January 28th 2007 01:43


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
at least this feather is outside LV
not all over the house *lol

magical to see you here my friend..

~Lily

Comment by Lily

January 28th 2007 01:45


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
katyzzz .. big compliment to my eyes, thank you...

~Lily

Comment by theadora

January 28th 2007 02:36


at the boardroom
Ad Magnum Opus
how easily it could have gone unnoticed

Comment by Lily

January 28th 2007 02:47


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
exactly what i thought ..later...
so much beauty, un-noticed...

thanks theodora

~Lily

Comment by DuskDevi

January 28th 2007 21:51


Rucks and Rolls
Rugby World Cup 2007
....la belle plume...dans le chapeau de ~Lily...

Comment by Lily

January 29th 2007 02:55


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
the beautiful Dusk ~ (with the chloro-form ~ CRACKED UP when Norm said that lol)

A feather in a hat.. i wonder why people do that.. is it a mating ritual or an Acubra bloke thing? .. dun see a lot of women with feathers in their hats....

You know feathers are haunting my life lol .. a friend's feather doona busts open; i made the mistake of opening a pack of mixed black and white ones for the (adorable <- i have to say that) imp.. now they are all over my house.. but i must say; this one is precious... i looked today; it's still there...

my writing is all over the place .. bleh

merci belle w/embrasse...

~Locquacious


Comment by Optomistic Opportunism

January 29th 2007 07:04


Bohemian Hiphop
Japanese Jazz Funk
Optomystic Opportunism
Arrr. The cat licked the feather to the weed, as the old dog barked at the tree, and why is my neighbours elephant always staring at me?

'coz last time it looked it got lucky

Comment by Jeanne Dininni

January 29th 2007 09:56


Writer's Notes
Lovely photo--lovely thought!

Be well!
Jeanne

Comment by Lily

January 30th 2007 08:09


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
hehe.. das funnee Opto ..

thanks Jeanne.. nice to see ya here...

~Lily



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Comment by Mrs M

January 30th 2007 10:21


Mum's Word
What is it about feathers that makes them so enchanting?

Love the photo.

Love & stuff
Mrs M

Comment by Lily

January 31st 2007 09:32


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
Hi Mrs M..

i think because... they are soft, shed from free creatures that can fly ~ how......I......wish

merci w/love and stuff
(reminds me of HR Puffin'stuff)
~70's

~Lily

Comment by Kleonaptra

February 6th 2007 23:16


Kalikapsychosis
Utterly magnificent photo - something truly within my style, something ordinary made to look out of the ordinary, a mysterious moment captured in word and image....

Comment by Lily

February 7th 2007 11:42


Bohemians United
Ars Poetica
ordinary to eXtra-ordinary
grateful to capture the soft
the discarded; once a part...

many thanks Kleonaptra

~Lily

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