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August 11th 2007 00:51
In a tiny corner of shade
One blue daisy
Amid a bush of wilted dancers
Out in the hot sun

still connected…

~Lily


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Comment by Tracy

August 11th 2007 11:59
Beautiful in its simplicity,Lily.

Tracy

Comment by Lily

August 11th 2007 12:36
thanks Tracy,

i woke up with this image on my mind... i'm not altogether sure i've portrayed it well enough for others to see what i saw...

~Lily

Comment by Tracy

August 11th 2007 22:15
Hi Lily, I can see it. Sometimes you don't need many words to express what you see/feel. I love it.

Comment by Louie

August 13th 2007 00:59
wow.......so few words yet such a powerful image, beautiful.......

Comment by Lily

August 13th 2007 06:29
many thanks for visiting my garden, Louie

~Lily

Comment by Lily

August 13th 2007 06:30
Tracy,

few words require the 'right' words to describe what i see, that's the hard part

~Lily

Comment by Tracy

August 13th 2007 06:41
That's true, Lily.

How was your haircut?

Tracy

Comment by Lily

August 13th 2007 06:51
went great Tracy, i'm all beautified now .. yes indeedy. and my hairdresser dubbed me 'brown faun'

going back on thurs for some tips .. perhaps some blonde, some brown and MAYBE a few thin reddys..

~Lily

Comment by Tracy

August 13th 2007 06:58
Oh, that sounds great.....hope it was relaxing and decadent...

Comment by Lily

August 13th 2007 07:17
it was Tracy, head massage and all.... i love going to the hairdressers... it's a girly thing, you know..

Comment by Tracy

August 13th 2007 07:26
Oh that sounds lovely and relaxing. Unfortunately I don't enjoy the hairdressers that much as my hair is so fine (health stuff etc) and unless it's my usual hairdresser it's just a matter of time before they say 'oh your hair is fine isn't it?' As if I don't know.....

So my replacement indulgence are massages and I had one on Sat and it was great, I left in a relaxed trance.....glad you enjoyed your pampering

Comment by Lily

August 13th 2007 07:39
i'd be the same, like don't mention my hair ok? i already KNOW. it's good you have a regular hairdresser who knows the score.

Glad you had some pampering yourself Tracy. A full body massage, mmm i've been promising myself one for ages. you're right, you come away in this blissful trance and hope it stays around a while



Comment by Anonymous

August 13th 2007 08:32
Oooh, for some reason I can't log in, but it's me Tracy here

Oh yes, massages are brilliant. I found one up the road that has specials on Saturdays so it's perfect. Sounds like we've both been pampered lately and that's great!!!

Byeee

Comment by Ash

August 13th 2007 08:51
Hey Lily

just reiterating what everyone else has said... so much beauty in such few words. Your garden sounds like a treasure trove for the mind.

Hope you gals both enjoyed your pampering over the weekend. As 'they' say... change is as good as a holiday.

monday hugs
ash

Comment by Lily

August 17th 2007 23:03
Hi Tracy and Ash :::waves :::

I'm pampering myself simply by being in the sacred space of my HOME. Been a ruff week.

peace.... ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


~Lily

Comment by Tracy

August 17th 2007 23:45
Hi Lily

I know what you mean. My week hasn't been great either. I'm exhausted and needing some peaceful, home time to replenish like you.

Enjoy your peace, hope it's just what you need,

Tracy

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