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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Phantoms

May 10th 2007 10:43

Phantoms
beating them damned wings
around me

not the same breezes
that swept round the altars of man
no, not the same
the stench of vox populi

sky is as azure as ever
and the birds of plenty gather
to speak in prophetess
of not if, but when
the end of seasons comes

and all our heroes are exposed
and the madness that was propagated
in the heart of silent mountains
and of the millions of invisible questions
that rise up from the dying lands

of the emptiness that fills us
of the fillings that empty us

and of their sorrow for the road-kill fox
that lay smeared on the grassy strip
in the middle of the big road
that everyone drove by
for three days
that no one picked up

man, soldier on ugly, no heart
no pause

~Lily

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Comment by Always Eighteen

May 10th 2007 12:44
This poem is like one of those songs that when you listen to it, you go, Yes, that's exactly how I'm feeling. Dead animals...


Are you from brisbane? If so, no any good poetry clubs around here?

Comment by Wendi

May 10th 2007 14:41
of the emptiness that fills us
of the fillings that empty us

Brilliant.

Comment by Candice

May 11th 2007 00:19
and the madness that was propagated
in the heart of silent mountains

I love the imagery of this. Your poetry flows really beautifully.

Comment by Ash

May 12th 2007 23:42
Hi Lily

I tried to pick out words that were my favourite but every time I tried I moved onto the next bit and it got even better... so I enjoyed it in its entirety... I love the emotion your poetry awakens.

ash

Comment by Lily

May 13th 2007 00:49
Hey Dean,

I'm from Melbourne Dean, i don't go to poetry clubs, so sorry not much help there... thanks for connecting.. look left and right and left again, before you cross the big road, oui?

~Lily

Comment by Lily

May 13th 2007 00:53
Wendi,

thanks for stroking the heart of this, for getting it

blessings for Mother's Day, Pixie ..

~Lily

Comment by Lily

May 13th 2007 00:56
the madness, yesss

.thank youuuuuuu Candice :::::miles::::::

~Lily


Comment by Lily

May 13th 2007 01:12
Ash, kindred,

Awakenings, always a good thing, thank you for your eyes here chicka...

~Lily



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