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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Rem-embers

June 17th 2007 09:54
Live from the Abyss..

I forgot everything
awake in a wake
pushing away faces
and pulling in dreams

rem-embers sparking
releasing my senses
spices in the smoke
inhaling the scent of tears

forget not my aroma
all we have is the morning
and I believe in dawn


~Lily 2005

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Comment by DuskDevi

June 17th 2007 21:13
Bon matin ~Lily l'amour...

rem-embers sparking
This. Is brilliant.

An oldie but wow...what a goodie. Lovely.


I've ben wondering why you haven't been writing... just realised that you have a new site, your own domain site and I hadn't subscribed to it.
I have now!

Are you well ~Lily l'amour?

big hugs

Dusk

Comment by katyzzz

June 17th 2007 22:05
Lily,

How could I not respond to remembers - it's the brain you know.

Keep up the good, such original, work. Well done.

katyzzz

Comment by Kleonaptra

June 18th 2007 04:13
Lovely word play Lily Love.

Comment by Mountain Fog

June 18th 2007 13:51
WOW!!!

love that "REM-EMBERS" too!! great stuff. And the whole imagery of waking..."awake in a wake"....etc....eggggcellent!
cheers
Fog

Comment by Wendi

June 19th 2007 20:15
just realised that you have a new site, your own domain site and I hadn't subscribed to it.


Huh? Whaa???

*Catching up with reality and now subscribed.*

This is a brilliant piece of writing... thoughts and words together so eloquently!

W

Comment by Lily

June 20th 2007 12:53
thank you everyone...

i wrote this fresh from a nightmare, i woke up crying and cried as i wrote it...

thanks muchly for the subscriptions Dusk and Wendi ..
yes i am well, and truly tired (cream crackered, plum tuckered and sleepy lidded)

~Lily

Comment by Kleonaptra

June 24th 2007 23:19
Ive been having nightmares too Lily Love....

Comment by Lily

June 24th 2007 23:54
i'm sorry you are, nightmares SUCK Kleo
but I've got some good poems out of them..

~Lily

Comment by Kleonaptra

June 25th 2007 01:22
Stalkers all I got....I dont much like thinking about this shit....But Im going to try and thrash it out in post form.

Comment by Lily

July 3rd 2007 01:07
late again; forgive

hope the thrashing is clearing the field up some Kleo..
i recommend intervals of drinking in scenic sundowns and the serenity of water...

love'n'hugs,
~Lily

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