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Reverie for Valentine; 5 Senses

February 14th 2008 12:39
A runaway curl gets caught
In one eye's lashes
He sweeps it to the left
And gazes to the right

His breath is a rhythm
That stirs the sleeping air
I court the swirl of it
Upon my blushing ear

The tongues of angels
Move about madly
To the charmed relish
Of his utterances

His aroma mingles
With the spices of nature
The gypsies clap
To invoke his smile

Still the likes of me
Soak dreams in salt
They permeate my skin
And I am left wanting

To touch you.......


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Comment by Lilla

February 14th 2008 23:04
Hi Lily,

It's been a while since I've read an orble poem that has made me sigh... the imagery, the sentiments, the romance ... sheer poetry my friend.

..simply Lovely, and inspiring.

Lilla ...

Comment by What's Your Story?

February 17th 2008 11:22
what a sensuous post. Lovely!

Comment by Kleonaptra

February 26th 2008 12:16
Oh Lily...
This one reminds me of my man, to be sure!

Comment by Lily

March 26th 2008 05:58
Lilla,

Been thinking of you dearheart, and here you are, ready to forgive me for being so late in reply.. -- hope you're well...


What's Your Story

iI'm glad you viewed it as such WTS, thanks so much!


Kleo

go hither and give him a big smooch Kleo lol - grrreat to see you and blessings to your house



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