Silence; a senryu
December 17th 2006 00:15
in the silence of
her house, i remember all
the noises and tears...
her house, i remember all
the noises and tears...
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Comment by Homer Joyce
So much said in so few words. You make me feel like an intruder. You make me feel like anything I write will detract from the glory of that poem.
Comment by katyzzz
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Love, katyzzz
Comment by Tracy
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Comment by Homer Joyce
That is the best poem I have ever read.
Comment by Lily
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~Lily
Comment by Homer Joyce
That is by far the best poem I have ever read.
Nothing comes close to it.
Pablo Neruda won a Nobel Prize for his poetry. I know Pablo. I know what he would say to you if he could come back from the grave.
Pablo would say to you, 'I wish I had written that. I wish I could have my life all over again just to write that one poem. All my works seem so insignificant now ... I thought I was a great poet until I read poetry written by that woman ... I wish I had read more of what women wrote, and studied them more ... Women rock this world.'
Behind every good man is ...
a lot of hot air? ...
In front of even good men is a lot of hot air ... We do not comprhend the depth and beauty of women at all ...
We are ignorant, blind creatures us men ... If only we would listen to women more ... this world would be a paradise of love ....
Men are fucked. I am a man. I am a fuckwit.
I thought I could write. I sort-of can, but I can't write like a woman. I'm not a mother ...
I don't know what it's like to carry a child in my womb ... Only mothers know about that stuff ...
I feel like never writing another word again ...
A few words from a mother are worth more than a thousand words written by men ...
I am ashamed to be a man ... I do believe we are superior in strength ... but that makes the female martyrs more courageous than any male martyr ... We (us men) get off on being 'courageous' ... We could learn a lot from women by studying how they act ... Women rock this world ... without women ... this world would not exist ...
I want to be God. I would create a new world. A brave new world populated with Lesbians. With me as the only man on it (dressed up in disguise as a woman) ... ****
What a divine poem.
Comment by DuskDevi
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Ceci est tres beau...et je sais....I feel it ~Lily love...my thoughts sont avec vous et votre mere...
Dusk
Comment by Ash
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Flashes of memories
Comment by Lily
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whatever i say will not suffice, so i will say - thanks for visiting my blog...
Divine Dusk,
merci ...and for your thoughts for us...
hope all is well for you and yours....
Ash,
hey thanks Ash, always more....
dodges a pine needle lol
~Lily
Comment by Lilla
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once it was read, Lilly...
was cry...
(((beautiful)))
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Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
your tears merge with my own.. thank you
George,
many thanks for your praise... means a lot...
Tracy,
thank you sweety, i took it with mama's digcam. The rose was the last one on the bush... spent and fading in a hot sun.
I took other pics of her garden as well, which i may use later.
~Lily