Soothe Refrain
November 5th 2007 09:00
in the rain down
i was Cinderella
no shoes, toes wriggling
dare darting from eyes
that have swam in chords
and wandered in song lines
I cannot lie
hung up, flung up
never hang up
pain is evident
in valleys of resignation
hearts under the covers
in the lining, in the far apart
to myself
breath bouncing off walls
we forgo the chaise
lover, splay your fingers
and I will fill the in between
come
~Lily
i was Cinderella
no shoes, toes wriggling
dare darting from eyes
that have swam in chords
and wandered in song lines
I cannot lie
hung up, flung up
never hang up
pain is evident
in valleys of resignation
hearts under the covers
in the lining, in the far apart
to myself
breath bouncing off walls
we forgo the chaise
lover, splay your fingers
and I will fill the in between
come
~Lily
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Comment by Lara M
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Comment by Mountain Fog
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QUOTE ME NO QUOTES!
i was Cinderella
no shoes, toes wriggling
Hi Lily,
those lines took me back, to my childhood, the wiggling toes, puddles and dares, this is an intriguing poem, as it has a current that flows and splashes with emotion, yes, I liked it.
cheers
fog
Comment by Lilla
From The Home Front
Enviro Warrior
Dream Herald
Esoteric Bookshop
for this soothing refrain...
where I felt myself,
dance again ...
between those
wiggling toes.
Beautifully melodic...
Thanks for this poetic...
verse...
still immersed...
:Lilla ...
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
i don't think i write anything without emotion fog.. nice to see you girl ..
bathe away Lilla, thankU...
~Lily
Comment by Bullamakanka
Hughie's Ziff
and I will fill the in between
Well put.
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
~Lily