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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Submerged; Rose of Atlantis

February 7th 2007 12:51

Submerged
Submerged


reality...................... ...................
dreams....................... ................

reality is harder than my dreams
life and submerged life

perhaps

the blur from tears
surrenders us to the submerged

~Lily


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Comment by Tracy

February 7th 2007 21:41
Lily.

I love the picture and the words, they fit together perfectly .

Sending you strength for those days when reality is harder than dreams and you feel submerged.

Tracy

Comment by Ash

February 7th 2007 22:43
hhhhmm lovely words Lily,

Atlantis - the city of answers
the aromatic smell of the rose
the bubbles of air
no good to the choking
flower
dragged down to the
depths

May Rose be plucked from the depths by a hand who offers as much love as it does answers

ash

Comment by Tracy

February 8th 2007 01:22
What a beautiful response, Ash.

Comment by Lilla

February 8th 2007 08:53
Wow, Lily,

I think Ash said all I wanted to say ...
beautifully...

but then again,

Water can cool the flowers ardour,
and cleanse it's aching heart,
to beat again...
For without water,
it will perish,
forever...?


Comment by Tracy

February 8th 2007 11:12
More beautiful words, Lilla....

Comment by Lily

February 9th 2007 13:30
Tracy, Lilla & Ash...

big time hugs for strength and poetry
s'all i got at the moment...

bee back layter

love,
~Lily

Comment by katyzzz

February 10th 2007 00:47
Lily,

That's you there in your little black dress, but fear not, the current moves you to the surface, encourage your dreams.

Walk your way to freedom to rid yourself of the black monster.

I loved your poem, if poetry is all you have you have a lot but allow life to keep you moving, plunge to the depths of despair, then, like Spring, will come renewal.

katyzzz

Comment by Lily

February 11th 2007 22:39
katyzzz

you show me the path and i'll walk it.. i have a yellow dress today..

ever dreamin'
~Lily

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