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To the God of Pain, by Sarojini Naidu

July 15th 2007 01:33
To the God of Pain

Unwilling priestess in thy cruel fane,
Long hast thou held me, pitiless god of Pain
Bound to thy worship by reluctant vows
My tired breast girt with suffering, and my brows

Anointed with perpetual weariness
Long have I borne thy service, through the stress
Of righteous years, sad days and slumberless nights
Performing thine inexorable rites.

For thy dark altars, balm nor milk nor rice,
But mine own soul thou’st ta’en for sacrifice;
All the rich honey of my youth’s desire,
And all the sweet oils from my crushed life drawn,
And all my flower-like dreams and gem-like fire
Of hopes up-leaping like the light of dawn.

I have no more to give, all that was mine
Is laid, a wrested tribute, at thy shrine;
Let me depart, for my whole soul is wrung,
And all my cheerless orisons are sung;
Let me depart, with faint limbs let me creep
To some dim shade and sink me down to sleep.

~Sarojini Naidu

Sarojini Naidu at Wikipedia


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Comment by Tracy

July 15th 2007 02:28
Aaaah, I love morning moments of beauty, Lily....thanks,

Tracy

Comment by Ash

July 16th 2007 07:03
Hiya Lily

oh I love this! You can just feel the spent emotions... see the pleading eyes... feel the warm tears...

an excellent find... thanks for sharing. It`s great to know that our hearts beat to the same rhythm of thousands of others...

hugs
ash

Comment by Lily

July 17th 2007 22:23
Hi Tracy, glad you could see the beauty..

~Lily

Comment by Lily

July 17th 2007 22:29
Hi Ash,

warm tears sticks in my head, even a cold heart cries warm tears...

i have befriended this poem. to write like this woman did? a dream..

~Lily

Comment by Grace

July 18th 2007 02:18
This is beautiful! My favourite lines were
"I have no more to give, all that was mine
Is laid, a wrested tribute, at thy shrine;"

Comment by Lily

July 18th 2007 12:13
Hi Grace,

i like those lines too.. ve' nice to see you here..

~Lily

Comment by The Hatter

July 19th 2007 06:21
Beautiful, simply beautiful

Comment by Lily

July 19th 2007 10:05
Isn't it just! What a gift to be able to write like this. Thank yous for your eyes here, The Hatter...

cheers w/ instant coffee (i know i know, i hope to be more educated on coffee at your blog)

~Lily

Comment by Grace

July 19th 2007 18:34
Lily- Thanks.

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