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Ars Poetica - by Lily

Word

October 12th 2007 09:34
The whirlwind died down
a long time ago
the word is out
and we were shaken
let out the birds
let them come home
ask the sky a question
can you go higher?
can you stand under the stars
when the symphony ends?
can you open your blood
for the power of verity?
the silver cord reaches to all
and not just to yourself


~Lily


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Comment by Mountain Fog

October 18th 2007 14:55
ooohh....someone is getting a whack with this one eh what!! hehe! Good on ya...like the ending...

cheers

fog

Comment by Lily

October 18th 2007 19:20
a whack lol ..that'd be me..
nice to see you fog girl... and cheers...

your name always reminds me of how my mind often feels.. foggy .. tis true.. nods

~Lily






Comment by Ash

October 25th 2007 21:42
Hey Lily

ask the sky a question
can you go higher?
can you stand under the stars
when the symphony ends?

I love this... the possibilities of that right there are romantically endless.

I hope you are well Lily love

cherry blossoms and butterfly kisses

Ash

Comment by Kleonaptra

October 27th 2007 10:48
Lily...
Your poetry is so amazing. Always reaching further to more beautiful places.....

Comment by Lily

October 31st 2007 20:58
Ash, Kleo.....

thankU for your eyes upon.. just a bundle of thoughts wrapped up in blue wishes...

~Lily

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